The Clean and Green Club, August 2023

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Shel Horowitz’s Clean and Green Marketing Tip: August 2023

Do You HAVE to Kaizen Your Headline? Why Not Try This Instead?

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In 40+ years as a student and practitioner of copywriting, I’ve often come across the advice to only test one variable. But some people might be taking that too far. In my email recently, I saw someone assert that the variable has to be tiny, like changing a single word in a headline.

You might remember that I most recently discussed the difference between Kaizen (continuous improvement, usually through small steps) technology improvements and technological Great Leaps in my October newsletter. Just like any other culture change, I think copywriting changes can be Kaizen—or they can be Great Leaps.

Let’s say there was such a thing as a haircutting robot, and you’re a copywriter assigned to write headlines for that device. Sure, you can test a single-word Kaizen variable like New Instant Salon Cuts Your Hair While You Sleep vs. This Instant Salon Cuts Your Hair While You Sleep–but I think it’s also fine to test a big-leap variable like New Instant Salon Cuts Your Hair While You Sleep vs. Wake Up Tomorrow Morning with the Hairstyle of Your Dreams.

I’ve always understood the one-variable rule to mean that if you’re testing the headline, don’t change the body copy, the layout, etc. in the same test. But the change could be as small or as bold as you want.

And why not test three or even four headlines in an A/B/C or A/B/C/D test? As long as it’s emailed to the same demographics and the same list on the same day, we can track a lot more things now than we could in the old days, so why not? We can even test for things like how response translates into long-term customer value. One version may get more clicks but fewer buys or lower total purchases. Make sure your testing gives you the metrics you need to properly evaluate your efforts.

By the way, I’d argue that there may be good reasons to violate the one-change rule, and strategies for understanding the data when you do. As an example, if you’re dealing with a time-sensitive offer that’s going to be worthless in a month, you may want to test a whole lot of stuff all at once. Go ahead, call me a marketing heretic!

And if you want a heretic’s fresh thinking in YOUR marketing, especially if your firm makes a positive difference in the world call me: 413-586-2388 (8 a.m. to 10 p.m. US Eastern Time—or email me with the subject, Your Marketing Services—Newsletter Reader. (Note that I’ll be away with very limited email through August 22. I recommend writing your email right away but scheduling it to arrive a few days after I get back.)

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Living a Committed Life: Finding Freedom and Fulfillment in a Purpose Larger Than Yourself

Living a Committed Life: Finding Freedom and Fulfillment in a Purpose Larger Than Yourself
by Lynne Twist (Berrett-Koehler, 2023, with Mary Earle Chase)

“The greatest threat to creating the future we want is fear, discouragement, and cynicism. People are dis-couraged because they’re disconnected from their own courage. They think somebody else is supposed to fix things…Once you get back in touch with your own courage, you realize, ‘Oh, I can do something about this. I care. I have heart. I have power. I can act!’ It is only in action that we can find hope; active hope becomes a beacon for our lives.” (pp. 196-197, hyphenation of “discouraged” is in the original and is deliberate)

Lynne Twist knows a thing or two about finding the power and creating action. Starting as an ordinary housewife in an acquisitive, suburban lifestyle, she has focused since the 1970s on creating a better world. She started and nurtured several major organizations including Pachamama Alliance and played a key role in several others, among them The Hunger Project. She’s helped organize female Nobel Laureates to harness their celebrity to increase their impact. She’s helped remote indigenous communities in Latin America and Africa seek justice from the corporations exploiting their land and undermining their traditions—while, at the same time, finding ways to work respectfully within that culture to drastically improve health outcomes (especially around birthing) even when that meant changing millennia-old patterns. She’s even taken on the demon of creating a positive relationship with money: overcoming scarcity mentalities (personal, regional, global) while setting boundaries of sufficiency instead of always “needing” more. She’s also a warm and accessible human being, as I found out when I attended a conference several years ago where she was presenting.


Twist was lucky enough to be directly mentored by (and built personal relationships) with quite a few luminaries including Buckminster Fuller, Mother Teresa, and various indigenous shamans—and much of their wisdom is also in these pages.


And she’s written a wonderful memoir/how-to manual on how to create meaning through social and environmental justice. It didn’t take me long to read this well-written, very accessible, and super-inspiring book.


Twist tells us not to worry if we don’t know how we’ll accomplish whatever lofty goals we’ve set. We take a stand for something positive, make the commitment, and the pieces to enable it begin to come together (p. 23).


Twist’s own five key commitments are:

  1. Ending world hunger
  2. Preserving the Amazon rainforest
  3. “Changing the dream of the modern world” (away from materialism and hoarding and toward recognizing the enoughness around us)
  4. Transforming how people relate to money
  5. Empowering women (p. 38)

All within a larger purpose of “creating a world that works for everyone with no one and nothing left out—what I call a you and me world” (p. 56, emphasis in original). Some of that happens when we change the narrative and the context, for example, talking about resilient “survivors” rather than passive “victims” (p. 85)—whether the person has survived directly-experienced violence or abuse, fraud at the hands of the Bernie Madoffs of the world, environmental catastrophe, a health crisis, etc. Another reframing (pp. 90-91) is that events happen FOR us, rather than TO us, and there are gifts to be found in even the tough experiences. She describes finding her own resilience after setbacks throughout the book, particularly pp. 104-106, 135-139, and 157-160.

You need to read the rest of the book for full context, but don’t neglect the action-focused final chapters 13-15 and the brief conclusion. Think of them as a short-form guide to effective activism. Chapter 13 shines a light on the crucial but often-ignored steps of self-care so as not to burn out, forgiveness (in both directions) to avoid strangling on your own hatred, and always seeking the new possibilities that arise from the wreckage. Chapter 14 is about discovering your big dream, taking your stand, and nine different ways to stay energized as your commitment begins to manifest. Chapter 15 uses the metaphors of hospicing the dysfunctional society we inherited and birthing not only new systems and institutions, but “a new kind of human being” (p. 193). And the conclusion is a quick pep talk, recognizing not only the contributions of the full-time activists and the famous, but the power of ordinary people to make change:

“Living your commitment does not mean you have to do something big and global. People who live their commitments are kindergarten teachers, nurses, firefighters, entrepreneurs, mothers—anyone who sees their life as a gift that they feel called to give in service. What is different is that your work and your life are now held in a larger context. You are focused not just on yourself and your job, but on the bigger picture—seeking to bring about systemic or transformational change…It is not the size of the commitment, but the intention and focus: What is the fulfillment of your       life’s purpose—your ‘splendid torch’ to hand on to future generations?” (p.201)

Pick up this book and read its life-changing contents in full. Take notes, and look for—and implement—the ways YOU can make a difference!

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About Shel

Speaker, author, and consultant Shel Horowitz of GoingBeyondSustainabiity.com helps businesses find the sweet spot at the intersections of profitability with environmental and social good — creating and marketing profitable products and services that make a direct difference on problems like hunger, poverty, war, and catastrophic climate change. His 10th book is Guerrilla Marketing to Heal the World.

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